Friday, October 1, 2010
My egg, and cheese oozing creation.
I woke up, and smelt the fresh sent of eggs, sisling on the hot stove, and English muffin poped out of the toaster. I thumped down the hallway, and spladered some cheese on my toasted english muffin. I took my freshly fried egg and ploped it on my toast as the warm heat from the egg slowy started to melt the cheese. i took a white plate from my coubard and slid the toast on. i walked over to my brown kitchen table and took a bite. Once i sunck my teeth into the english muffin, the toast cracked, the cheese oozed out , and flooded my mouth with flaver. The egg yock was adding that much for delisous flaver to my breakfast. i took a sip of my 1 persent milk. and took another bite, i couldnt stop, so it was definitly one of my favorite breakfasts.
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*I like how you discribed how it looked, tasted, and smelt
ReplyDelete*I like how you have so much discription
wish- I wish that nothing
I love your description, it makes me want to...stalk you O.o
ReplyDeleteIt makes my mouth water, so delicious. :)
I HATE how there isn't any pictures, i mean, C'MON!
your story made me very hungry.
ReplyDeletenice writing! my only suggestion is streching out the parts you think is the one that will make people go, 'ooh that makes me hungry'. But other than that, good job.
ReplyDeletethanks everyone i really do aprecialte it and i will improve it! :D
ReplyDeletethat was really good descriptive! U have some mistakes but not many. All in all it was a good story and had great descriptive
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